pronouns - Sentence improvement



The given sentence is-


'As no one knows the truth as fully as him, no one but him can provide the testimony.'


As far as the highlighted part is concerned, I improved it as-


'As no one knows the truth as fully as he does, no one but he alone can provide the testimony.'


What's is wrong in the above sentence? I am struck.




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