word usage - Describing a product in an ad
We are preparing an ad for pictures, and we would like to write that we have certificates of authenticity for the pictures. What would be the best way to write it?
My suggestion is to use passive (but feel free to suggest your own way), but I'm not sure about the 'to be' verb:
The pictures are issued with an international certificate of authenticity.
The pictures were issued with an international certificate of authenticity.
The pictures have been issued with an international certificate of authenticity.
Also, should I prefer 'certificate of authenticity' or 'authenticity certificate' in the given sentence?
Thank you :)
Answer
I would go with are because each new order includes the certificate, not just orders in the past.
And go with "certificate of authenticity." Somehow the other one sounds weird. It's correct, but not idiomatic and doesn't roll off the tongue well.
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